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If I Cry You a River by ~songwhispers:iconsongwhispers:



If I cry you a river,
Will you build me a boat?
To keep me from drowning,
Just to keep us afloat.

If I cry you a river
And I drown the whole world,
Will you fly to the heavens,
And make the sun unfurl?

If I asked you to save me
From the sorrow and rain,
Would you be light in the darkness?
Would you outshine the pain?
If I asked you to save me
From the dark in my mind,
Could you rescue my heart
So I could leave this behind?

If I cry you a river
Will you be there for me?
Holding on
Until eternity?

If I asked you to save me
From the sorrow and rain,
Would you light up the darkness?
Would you outshine the pain?
If I asked you to save me
From the dark in my mind,
Could you rescue my heart?
Could I leave this behind?

But if I cried you a river
And you could understand,
Could I let all this go
And hold onto your hand?

If you dried up my river
And soaked up the rain,
If you shined in the darkness
And were the sun for my pain,
If you rescued my heart
And were the stars in my night,
Could I let all this go?
Would it all be alright?

If I let it all go,
Would it all be alright?

If I let go,
Would it be alright?
©2008 ~songwhispers
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It's a working title, but if you guys can think of something that sounds better, let me know.
This is actually a song, I just haven't writtien down the score yet, and i wouldn't know how to get music on here anyway...

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~swiftfox13:iconswiftfox13: Feb 26, 2008, 7:56:28 PM
ooh, i really like this. it's beautiful! :)

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~middaymoon:iconmiddaymoon: Feb 26, 2008, 8:26:39 PM
It really is!

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~jedimario:iconjedimario: Feb 27, 2008, 1:43:45 PM
I was thinking song as I read it :lol:

Awesome!

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~DeLesslin:iconDeLesslin: Feb 27, 2008, 7:35:37 PM
*faints*

I can't wait to hear your musical setting

*overflows with EXCITEMENT*
~lamarble:iconlamarble: Feb 29, 2008, 10:19:28 AM
I just heard you perform it in person! I am at the Honors Day computer labs. I lub you! :D
~songwhispers:iconsongwhispers: Feb 29, 2008, 2:51:06 PM
I'm glad you liked it! I'll have to do it better for you sometime when I'm not NERVOUS OUT OF MY MIND like I was today. And no microphones, because it messed up. And with me actually being able to hear myself, because that makes me sound more confident. And not with me wearing heels, because that did not help the shaking today. And no dress up clothes, because they were not comfortable. Preferably with me sitting down and feeling chill. So alot of fixing for my next performance, but I'll get around to it.